Black Ghost

Sam-Thanks for the review, it really helped! I've got a bit of concern before I get too far into the story: make sure you don't turn this into a total ...

I loved this! You had a lot of good imagery in there, it's like I was seeing everything right in front of me. Sorry I don't have anything useful to ...

the beginning of the end is the start of the middle of the longest yard.

I thought this had a lot of good emotion in it. Great poem!

Ok, I've rewritten the prologue, so now it's longer and more detailed. Enjoy :D

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CARD TRICK!!!

Prologue Clarissa was dreaming. She lay on a blanket in the center of a beautiful meadow, golden poppy all around her, swaying in the wind like the waves of an ...

THANK YOU!!! I've been really stuck on my story that takes place in this fantasy world and now I know why!!! It's because I don't know what the heck my ...

I'm using the snowflake technique, but I kind of feel like step three and four should be reversed...but that's just me.

There was this quote I read one time but I can't remember the name of the person who said it. anyway it basically says that origninality doesn't have anything to ...

What do you think makes a story original?

thanks, it was just something off the top of my head and I'm glad it turned out so good the only thing i think need word is the second stanza...anyone ...

i totally agree. Lord of the Flies has a lot of symbolism and shows us why having a society with rules is so important to our survivial

I close my eyes and silently sigh, the breath taking out the grit of my soul. Bare skin frostbitten by your love that's gone colder than the arctic depths. Slipping ...